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    dots Submission Name: Friendsdots
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    Author: Psychohenry32
    ASL Info:    1638/Femail/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 22/33/24
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 235
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 814



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    dotsFriendsdots
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    A true friend is someone who ...
    You get into stupid fight with,
    Say horrible, nasty things to
    And are just as easily forgiven.

    A real friend is someone ...
    Who lets you cry on your shoulder,
    And doesn't expect the same in return.

    An honest to God friend will never ...
    Laugh to hurt you
    But laugh to make you laugh.

    A true friend ...
    Doesn't care when you call
    Just to talk

    A best friend ...
    Will never tells your secrets
    And always keeps your trust

    An ok friend ...
    Will say good bye when you move
    And miss you when your gone

    A true friend ...
    Will help you pack up all your stuff
    And cry to see you leave




    Submitted on 2006-01-23 00:32:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey,

    Good write. The flow works. It is a little bit simple, but simple works alot of the time. It could have used more emotion, but this way works too.

    *Let it Flow*
    Raven
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by Silent_Tears | [ Reply to This ]



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