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    dots Submission Name: Stolen Piecesdots
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    Author: Psychohenry32
    ASL Info:    1638/Femail/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 22/33/24
    Words: 291
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
    Total Views: 234
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2086



    Description:
       I know this isn't "proper credit" but certain parts of this one are specificaly borrowed from known musicians ... including ... Nirvana, The Foo Fighters, Breaking benjamin, 3 Days Grace, KoRn, Papa Roach, Dolly Parton, John Denver, Nine Inch Nails (or Johnny Cash) and so many more ... parts of this are "completely original" but a lot is borrowed. THE PARTS IN THE "QUOTES" ARE BORROWED


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    dotsStolen Piecesdots
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    I love you
    I love you not because of who you are,
    But because of who I am when I'm with you.
    I also believe you are a little shit
    But I still care about you.
    "No matter how hard I try
    I'm never satisfied.
    I think I'm better off alone"
    "I hate everything about you"
    And yet I love you
    "I tear my hewrt open
    I sew myself shut
    My weakness?
    I care to much
    Scars remind us that the past is real"
    "It seems funny to me
    How life can be"
    "ever changing
    And rearranging"
    "Even if it kills me
    I'm gonna smile"
    "If I could keep myself,
    I would find a way"
    "Bittersweet memories
    That's all I'll be taking with me"
    "I'm getting tired of this
    Starting over again
    Somewhere new"
    Right now
    I want you
    To stay far away from me
    "I gotta get outta here"
    "I'm leaving on a jet plane"
    Far away from all that is familiar
    Far away from you!
    We're probably better off
    As friends
    "I don't love you
    Like I loved you" anymore
    "I've got nothing to do
    Nothing left to prove"
    Canada would be a great escape
    I hope you choke on a grape!
    If this is good-bye
    Then good-bye forever
    "I could have missed the pain
    But I would have mised the dance"
    Come to this place
    And I'll take my fist and smash your face.
    "Holow heroes separate
    As they run"
    Run, run, run,
    As fast as you can
    Get away now
    Or you won't be a man
    "I wish I could explain,
    But there are NO words"
    "I'm on a plane"
    "Many a hand
    Has scaled the grand
    Old face of the plateau."




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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. There is a lot of anger there. Is this about anyone I know? Jon perhaps? It is very powerful. I like it. You have a lot of passion in your writing. Keep writing. Your work is good.
    Love ya babe!
    Alicia
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by Spiderwebb123 | [ Reply to This ]



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