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    dots Submission Name: Bloom Haikudots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 10
    Class/Type: Haiku/Nature
    Total Views: 603
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I did a colored pen drawing of a flower that had smaller flowers coming off the tips of the petals and out - I added the haiku and "aflowers" wound around the petals - fun with art & poetry!

    The nature of man.....

    Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share
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    dotsBloom Haikudots
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    Bloom of Universe
    Light Spir"IT" Man Aflowers
    Essence of Be"I"ng




    Submitted on 2006-01-23 15:48:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      are you trying to tell us something? this can be taken differently, pending the reader. but being art as it is i'll leave it there. It's nice, not the typical haiku, and not one might necessarily tradpire with drawing a flower, however I can see the relation. sweet, Have a good weekend.
    | Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      The universe grows...
    Like a flower...
    Man has just discovered...
    SPACE TIME BOMBS

    AHAHAHAHA

    Yeah...

    Being a flower in space feels like choking around the neck. No air, soil, water or light to create photosynthesis.

    BLOOMS! BLOOMS! DOOOM DOOM!

    The universe
    Is cool
    When flowers bloom
    On a purple planet
    Called X-tra dent
    Ice!

    Don't go away
    No
    No
    Stay right where thou art, little flower
    Wheee!
    | Posted on 2006-04-06 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      a very good job here it really made us think with simpleand special words. thankd for that friend.
    have a nice day
    and if you have time please take a look to my writings..
    peace and love
    take care
    Victor
    | Posted on 2006-03-22 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]
      this dont make no sense!! u should explain this more!! im sry i just dont get it it could be cuz im stupid but i dont get it!
    ~akaila~
    | Posted on 2006-04-14 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I believe you are referring in this hailu how on this Earth we control our own mind and all the ideas that come with IT
    I can understand a little more clearly where your writes come from with this Haiku
    Excellent Job
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Another lovely haiku you have written. Very nicely expressed and the interpretation here could be one of many. I admire the way you can write with such few words yet the meanings one can derive from your write is many. We all do indeed blossom into something, we all have something to offer the world, and remain unique to ourselves all at the same time. Another good haiku. And the art you describe in your description sounds lovely. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      I think I have said this before
    but I love a good Haiku

    To me there is more to this the meets the eye.

    Man as in mankind is like a flower
    we have bloomed into something good or bad it doesn't matter...just that we have grown into something that is beautiful for the most part.


    And to answer your question
    no I am not

    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      I am not the only one who has quite a following - am I ?

    As usual, short, sweet, to the point and much much meaning wrapped around your words.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      This was deep. I loved how you wrote the words like spir"IT" and be"I"ng it really made me feel that there was a deeper meaning to this then I interpreted. Great job!
    Alyssa
    | Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by alcoholcaust | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it alot. its deep especially for this type of poem. i truly like your work and how you put it . i honestly hope to read more by you soonb. keep up the awesomeness.
    love
    tina
    | Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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