Have you ever reached a point in time
That all you feel is empty inside
When even though the world threatens to fall down
You wear neither a smile nor a frown
To come to a cross road with a million waiting decisions
Yet searching them holds no fascination
And while I should be glad
To not feel deeply sad
It worries me more to be carefree
As if I’m no longer me
I should be trapped in uncertainty
About just what will come to be
But all that should really matter
Has been placed in the gutter
Living life in self-delusion
Keeps me sane amidst this confusion
Just push all the drama aside
And lock it deep inside
Till even I fail to see
The dark cloud that surrounds me
Become one with the mask that hides my tears
For the face you see has nothing to fear
Just your average girl with you average life
You’d never imagine she dreams of a knife
Of a freedom not of the flesh
But rebirth that can be gained only after death
To transcend beyond the perceptions of this plane
Leave behind the emotions that have been my bane
Death for me holds no fear
But dieing is an act that’s pain does sear
And even as I dream of an escape
That my hands could take
My pride keeps me here
For such cowardice I couldn’t bear
So I wait on the winds of fate
For an ending that is never late!
i can relte. the emptiness inside. as if you pulled the plug and bled out who you are. The feeling that nothing is gain or loss. That you'll never be full or empty. Just traped in-between. Don't worry. There are those of us who do as well. But overall, this is a great piece of poetry. I wait to see more from you.
Wow. I havent read this one till now. Umm...speechless. This is the best thing I think youve ever written. I love how this flows. The feelings, raw uncensored emotion. Ive never really seen a write where youve just let it all flow out. I want to make is so you dont dream of a knife. I want to take away the mask and dry the tears. I know this is only supposed to be a comment but I couldnt help it. AWESOME write. I love you. Keep writing, let everything out from your finger tips, not you viens.
Excellent! I cant believe this didnt get any comments. I guess people find it too depressing and give up on it never realizing the ending is superb! Much like how this write is! Yup, stick it out till the end...cuz its never late like you said. Good one kid! Thanks for sharing!
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