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    dots Submission Name: Betta Ast Ya Mamadots
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    Author: doctorwise
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBetta Ast Ya Mamadots
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    I dun speak a gud Englis
    and ma swarin jus as bad
    Ben rais in Nawlins but
    I's wonderin if en ya know ma pappi

    betta ast ya mama

    I den had a babe naw missir
    ebebodi no we ben in dat chicken coup
    ya say I's a sweet lil thang
    and my Bessy eben look lik you

    betta ast ya mama

    Ebethin I no is wat ma taught
    I's ken spell and write ma name
    drink moe dan da fishis ma pa caught
    eben smoke moe fuel den an airplane

    betta ast ya mama

    Dem heifas say ma hair is nappi
    but I's pay dem no mine
    dey jus jealus coz I's happi
    den marrid me a fine kelbin kline

    betta ast ya mama

    See I no ma gud uben heaben
    jus a grinnin frum ear to ear
    I's ofen thank him fa ma mama
    cuz I's glad to be hir

    jacenta aibangbee
    copyright2003




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