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    dots Submission Name: Unknown Lovedots
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    Author: Qutedia7
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 54/70/31
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 225
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 372



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    dotsUnknown Lovedots
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    I love you alot from head to toe. You make me smile, but you can never know. I see you in school and always say "hi" secretly wishing you would reply. It tears me apart when I'm not with you. I'll tell you soon, always meaning to you how I feel, always dropping hints. You will never understand. I try but I seem to tell you about me true love unknown.




    Submitted on 2006-01-23 16:43:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I liked it, maybe because I can relate very much. It almost seems like these are my own words. I liked the part when you say 'You will never understand'.
    I suggest you seperate your sentences, it would make the reading easier.
    It's a good write, I'm surprised there weren't any comments.
    Tom
    | Posted on 2006-04-30 00:00:00 | by Tom110989 | [ Reply to This ]



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