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    dots Submission Name: Tell Medots
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    Author: Qutedia7
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 54/70/31
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Love Poem again pplz. Plz comment. Thanx


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    dotsTell Medots
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    Tell me, will you always be there for me. Do you have the heart, will you care lyke I care? Tell me, do I mean something to you. Am I different from the others, not lyke the other ones before? Tell me and you will see, that I am everthing you want me to be.




    Submitted on 2006-01-23 16:47:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think if you would of changed the style of the poem it might of read better, also I think you mean "like" not lyke, it could of used a little more image and description in it maybe something to fire the imagionation an breath a little life into it, but thats just my take
    adnil
    | Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by adnil | [ Reply to This ]



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