She'll never forget -------------------------------------------
She'll never forget
the way he looked at her
knowing she was his
how happy he looked
She'll never forget
the feeling of his arms
wrapped around her
the feeling of his breath on her neck
not wanting this moment to end
She'll never forget
how happy they were
the way her stomach dropped
when he walked in to the room
the way she lost her breath
when he leaned in to kiss her
She'll never forget
those long nights together
wanting each moment to last
just a little longer
knowing she was safe
laying there in his arms
But most of all
She'll never forget
the day he looked at her
his face contorting with pain
as the words he said
broke her heart
She'll never forget
the way he smiled
and walked away
like she was nothing
we always go into relationships thinking that it will last forever and that everything is perfect. just as we think that things are going strong everything starts to crumble. this poem is very well written. it portrays emotions so real and so sad. it really tugged at my heart strings.
In contrast to most poems I liked the ending. It was sudden. Just kinda snuck up on you. A surprise ending, the rest was heartfelt. Emotions we can travel to and fro none the less a longing for that moment. Moments like those are mixed emotions good and bad. Hence the saying better to love and have loss then to never love at all. I am still not to sure about that one. I mean yeah sure love is great but when they smile and walk off then what. It's like giving a kid a candy then taking it away. Oh well at any rate I did enjoy the read. One thing about that candy analagy is one taste kinda sets a pattern hmm. Can't get the honey unless you are willing to get stung a few times in the end well worth it.
In contrast to most poems I liked the ending. It was sudden. Just kinda snuck up on you. A surprise ending, the rest was heartfelt. Emotions we can travel to and fro none the less a longing for that moment. Moments like those are mixed emotions good and bad. Hence the saying better to love and have loss then to never love at all. I am still not to sure about that one. I mean yeah sure love is great but when they smile and walk off then what. It's like giving a kid a candy then taking it away. Oh well at any rate I did enjoy the read. One thing about that candy analagy is one taste kinda sets a pattern hmm. Can't get the honey unless you are willing to get stung a few times in the end well worth it.
This is such a sad little poem. You have captured this experience so very well with your words and it sounds to me like this perhaps was a personal experience of yours? I think we have all been there at some point in our lives and it is one of the hardest things to deal with and accept. It raises a million questions in your mind and hurts like hell. But then, as time passes, you begin to heal, and realize that it probably was for the best anyway. It takes a long time, but once you finally see this person for what they really are, you find acceptance and move on. And usually you move on to find better things and better people to have in your life. And learned a valuable thing about life as well. It makes you stronger. A blessing in disguise...? Perhaps. A very nicely written poem of heartbreak. Take care.
This is an age-old story of broken hearts and ended love. A story i know all too well. This is a nice piece though it just sucks it has to end on such a sad note. Maybe it doesnt maybe she finds someone who will make her feel whole again. I'd like that.
wow ive heard that story plenting of times, hell i even lived it, but you ...you put it into spectacular words. words that make your imagination wander. good write
wow this is just like summd up my relationship next broke my heart, n everything you felt, i felt too but the one thing that came out of the heartbreak was in the end i found out who i truly was and i gaind a great friend even tho he still steals my breathe without even knowing it
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