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    dots Submission Name: This Dying Souldots
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    Author: ArtichokeMosher
    ASL Info:    15/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 146/201/81
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 159
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       Just a poem off the top of my head...


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    dotsThis Dying Souldots
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    The soul of the uncaring...
    Remains forever glaring...
    Into the face of the daring...

    With all the thoughts buzzing in your head...
    Of all the important things left unsaid...
    Your soul awaits the day you arrive dead...

    This soul will forever bleed...
    Guilty this soul will plead...
    Untill the day it is freed...

    This soul took all your pain...
    All your stress and all your strain...
    Now its the day the soul will wither and drain...




    Submitted on 2006-01-23 19:49:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thats deep. I really like it. It makes a lot of sense. I think it could to a lot of people. Keep up the good writing! :-) <3
    | Posted on 2006-02-03 00:00:00 | by AmazingForever | [ Reply to This ]



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