I Believe by SumN

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Submission Name: I Believe dots

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Author:	SumN
ASL Info:	16/Male/Missouri
Elite Ratio:	3.86 - 17/22/6
Words:	105

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	180
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	620

Description:
This poem is dedicated to my 3-year relationship that is somehow still growing. The reason i wrote this is because sometimes i feel as if are love is one-sided. But we will see, faith is all i got.

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What happened to us?
Was This a mistake?
God tell me was this suppose to be?
When will i find true happiness?
Hurry! Choose a path for me!
Im scared, Im put to the side
The Road's i turn on all look the same
Where is she?
Whats she doing while i lay awake thinking?
While I make myself believe shes thinking back
Does she truly love me?
Does my reflection in the mirror show a different side of me?
I feel like you tell the opposite of truth, is this lie to be?
You know what? Fuck this whole poem because I Believe!

Submitted on 2006-01-23 19:52:13 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is pretty good. You have asked so many questions here and they are certainly some popular questions. We all ask these at some point in our relationships. It just cant be helped. We wonder and worry, yet faith is what holds everything together. Your last line is the best of this poem. We never really know completely how someone else feels. We have to rely on our faith in them that they are honest and open. Just as faith keeps us strong in so many other aspects of life. This is a good expression of your feelings. Welcome to elite. Take care.

Lorna
| Posted on 2006-01-28 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  You must always believe. There is never any way of knowing exactly how somebody feels towards you. All you can do is see the signs, read them, and know if the road is a smooth one or a rocky one. I am sure that if the relationship has held on for 3 years...then there is something there.

Much love,

Li Li
| Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
  i know what you mean. When you think you've found love and you really believe it, it doesn't feel mutual. Love can be a painful thing. Sometimes it can be good, sometimes bad. Most of the time confusing. Keep writting about it. You seem like a softy. Girls usually like that. Just be yourself. If she doesn't like the real you, then dump her.
| Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by L0RIN | [ Reply to This ]
  I think you had a fuzzy idea and tried your best to go with it and it still came out a bit fuzzy. Im not really getting a clear picture of what you are saying and maybe its just me but the spacing is a bit odd. Im not saying its bad im just saying it needs some elbow greese to make it shine.
| Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by DiamondTears | [ Reply to This ]

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