into a red light
rippin a past life
off to a ceremony
presented for one and only
sidewalkin a cool night
livin a real life
shearing of a pony
whispers from someone phony
and the sight succumbs
from the light it shuns
a little bitty stain on a bathtub drain
and the demon shrieks
from her pretty cheeks
as two worlds collide, one uncontrolled both dark inside
a drink I drank too drunk
a stink I stank of funk
livin the wild side
day to day torn inside
myopia compromise
a girl or a boy decide
enduring a last ride
all now scream from outside
her heart cries out when its paid for
a mind set to future, just the day before
love is blind, but its all the wrong kind
skidding the pavement, he looks into her eyes
ok i get a car crash scene impresion of teens on a midnight drive, i feel the ryhmeing and flow but idk what it is that bothers me about it, idk it's just me. but anyway about your request for a title, i personaly read untitled poems just to see what there like and give title sugestions so here are my ideas if you like them;
life's crash: because of the visial crash and the watse of life
one night; one mistake: for the mistake of drunk driving
well there are two titles idk if you like them but there just some thoughts anyway nice work.
Submission Name: untitled
