ok i get a car crash scene impresion of teens on a midnight drive, i feel the ryhmeing and flow but idk what it is that bothers me about it, idk it's just me. but anyway about your request for a title, i personaly read untitled poems just to see what there like and give title sugestions so here are my ideas if you like them;
life's crash: because of the visial crash and the watse of life
one night; one mistake: for the mistake of drunk driving
well there are two titles idk if you like them but there just some thoughts anyway nice work.