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    dots Submission Name: Purple Dreamsdots
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    Author: RyukiTZR
    ASL Info:    14/F/-
    Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 133/130/44
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Dark
    Total Views: 339
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 788



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       Perhaps this is one of the reasons why I started to like purple... This happened long time ago, but its only now I feel like thinking over it...

    I'm not sure if that was a he or a she, but it was really shocking...

    Think again, it was the time I was afraid of the dark. After that dream I wasn't that afraid anymore...


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    dotsPurple Dreamsdots
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    Sat in the dark, and up high in a tree.
    Where black exotic petals, flew free.
    And I didn't know why I was there...

    Then I felt something... or someone behind me,
    And was resting on my shoulder, breathing out warmth in the cold breeze. My body froze, and soon finally gathered up courage to turn around. As I did, I saw those amethyst eyes... In the midst of black hair... and flawless white skin...

    It was confirmed somebody, but its so scary and beautiful at the same time that I didn't know what to do... Suddenly I had fell off from the branch, and then it dawned on me those flower petals weren't black, but a dark shade of purple...

    When I woke up, my head was nearly falling backwards off the pillow.




    Submitted on 2006-01-24 02:49:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      OMFG! This was sooooooo cool! You were very descriptive. I love that. I could visualize it in my mind. I'm saving this to my favorites! I love this piece and I wouldn't want to change anything about it! It's perfect! Keep writing, girl! ^-^ *hugs*


    Beth
    | Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by crimson_panda | [ Reply to This ]
      i love it the pictures where so beatuiful balck pettals wonderfull very sybolic
    | Posted on 2006-04-28 00:00:00 | by brokenfairy | [ Reply to This ]
      I could totally visulize that in my head. I really like the exotic black pedals. The poem sounds so beautiful , with the eyes and the hair. Awesome.

    inkpen
    | Posted on 2006-01-29 00:00:00 | by inkpen | [ Reply to This ]
      that was defenaltly good symbolism and i could see what was happening in my head at the same time... i think what your dream is saying is the petals of purple are you hopes slowly falling... the dead tree is lost hope...and the girl represents death... and falling...well i think u get the picture...
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by True Purpose | [ Reply to This ]
      This piece is really interesting. Writing about a dream. maybe you can get it analyzed. Good effort. Lots of details into your dream made it very real for me.

    Crackwalker
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by Crackwalker | [ Reply to This ]
      hm... i see symbolizm in this dream of yours.There is only one thing that remains unclear to me: Is it the dark what you were afraid of, or was it something beneath or in the darkness. Related to the darkness, maybe? It just doesn't seem like this dream could be talking about something as simple as the darkness... or is the darkness symbolic?
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by diamonds_2_dust | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. That's definitly pretty crazy. I really like the thought and emotion. This really happend...that's strange. Glad you decided to share it with everyone. Thanks! Nice work, you should write more often. PeaCe - MC-Chillz
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by MC-Chillz | [ Reply to This ]



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