Great insight into the situation! Sometimes this fact (I'm still here) gets recognized and appreciated in time; when it doesn't, a girl's gotta say "so long, good bye..." and look elsewhere for one who knows a good thing when he sees it. I'd guess I didn't need to state my personal opinion but have seen this one play out for too many. Sharon
men can be so stupid...they're always after the women they can't have...never noticing the ones yearning and dying for their affections *sigh* stupid stupid...oh well. it's life. great poem by the way. i loved how you only rhymed a few times...not many would feel that way..but i think rhyme schemes like abababab are SO ridiculously boring and dumb. i'm not a rhyme person, so i enjoyed the few rhymes that added more flow. so you taught me that some rhyme is okay. thanks. keep it up. :P *barbie*
Nice work! My toughts on this were you kinda took it way back for me. This reminds of one of my personal favortie poets Georgia Ilian shes great meaning your great. I dont know what else to say reall but great job. You are the kind of person who needs to let your poetry be known.