welcome another person from ontario canada not 2 many of us on this site this was good in its own way i dont think i've read anything like it before no bad intent given good read and good write sandman
Impactful piece on love and loss - what once was but will never be again. This was the second in a row I read with similiar theme but different ways of expressing it & I enjoyed this piece too! It's not fraught with emotion but shows how somethings we think are for sure in life can change. Just a suggestion, but this line, "You the the lightd flashing" has a typo & doesn't make sense. Great! Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share tif
I can tell from this peice its not a perspective you seem too use to. although admittedly its an amazing write, that much is clear. but it still seems slightly I don't know... out of place I suppose. I'm not sure how to explain myself quite well enough to be understood. either way I look forward to more recent works being added.
SAM (p.s stop by my page rainbow girl ;-) see if you know who I am from it)
This was a sad poem. I can't think of any bad things to say about it because it all looks great to me. I agree with tif, it's an impactful piece on love and loss. Did this happen to you or someone you know, or was it just a poem you made up? Well anyway, great write.