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    dots Submission Name: Haptic Therapydots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 622
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    Description:
       My word of day - Haptic - relating to or based on the sense of touch; from Greek haptesthai, to touch.

    Inspired by my class today - I volunteer with a group of clients at an organization Oasis and I'm working with them on finding inspiration in life and expressing it creatively in a variety of ways; poetry, journaling, singing, dancing, photography, art......it's been a little over 6 months and today I just felt how powerful our connections are - I also shared some poems by Frank Maguire and as I told him, "IT's" truly amazing the power of words - touching in more ways than one.
    Thanks ES and friends for the multitude of inspiration you give me here
    Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share
    tif


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    dotsHaptic Therapydots
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    Transfer of energy
    the power of touch
    Haptic sensations
    love flowing
    by fingertips
    merged in embrace
    invisible bubbles
    blown in friendship
    like the pattern in
    heated glass




    Submitted on 2006-01-24 16:51:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Touch is a feeling.
    A feeling that ignites.
    Burns and excites!
    Touch is a feeling
    That flows in your mind
    And spreads through every fingertip
    It can be harsh or kind.

    Haptic feelings
    I feel when touching keys
    As I say "Good job"
    On this poem read by me.

    Haptic is a cool word.
    It sounds almost like space.
    Haptic makes me giggle
    Especially when touching lace
    neg-
    lig-
    ee

    Hee hee
    Ho ho
    I liked what you wrote
    Don't you ever slow
    Down
    Writing
    Your POEMS!
    | Posted on 2006-04-06 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      This is outstanding
    These few words affected me very strongly
    I cant really put my finger on exactly why
    But this write really hit me deep
    I felt like you were describing a passage thru life
    Very Nicely written
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-03 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Touch Therapy. Energy flowing from one to another. Hmm, I like that kind of therapy
    Very nice write Tiff.
    And the invisible touch you mention, by friends like those here at Elite . < Nice touch

    The last part was really nice..

    "invisible bubbles
    blown in friendship
    like the pattern in
    heated glass"

    Good work!
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this. It's simple, and yet complex, both at the same time. I liked the wording, and the inspirational feeling. The story in the description is pretty good too.
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by darkened_soul | [ Reply to This ]
      MMMMM touchin, strokin, feelin... whew! It's getting hot in here.
    Tiff- this is a deep piece. Fantastic metaphor at the end. A minimilistic piece with a goo msg. Well done my friend well done.
    Ok now I am going to go attack Cleo, thanks for the "rise"

    your friend
    ben
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by BenCollier | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiff, is it a coincidence that I'm working on s thing all about touch?

    No such thing, right? Very nice, dear, what better sensation than touch?

    Extreeeeemly nice

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree. Touch is a special sense and you have mastered this sense perfectly Tiff. You TOUCH the lives of the people within the Oasis group.

    I would take my hat off to you if I wore one.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      The power of touch is amazing in all it's forms. I have a son who cannot stand to be lightly touched, but loves nothing better that a big hug-the calming effect is immediate.
    Touching grounds us and offers support in a very basic way. As you say- a transfer of energy.
    very nice write...I loved reading your description and insight.
    jan
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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