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    dots Submission Name: Whispers (edited)dots
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    Author: sug90
    ASL Info:    14/F/U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 69/93/34
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 155
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    dotsWhispers (edited)dots
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    Behind these tattered eyes
    Dark circles, the covergirl hides
    Love and life
    The whispers she despised
    Did you hear the news tonight?
    So and so died,
    Shot with a gun
    Counting the dark sunrises gone by

    The gossip spreads
    The snake always lies
    Telling tales,
    Shading the deepened sky
    Wishing they could find someone better,
    A more revealing guise

    Even silent people cannot hide,
    Haven't you noticed?
    There are more than secrets
    to beckon in the twilight
    Still more angles to cover
    Before the sun blinds the sky




    Submitted on 2006-01-24 17:49:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      pulling the veil off the truth when it's eyes aren't adjusted to the light, causing it pain. Perfect. Keep it coming! It makes me think more of a long awaited sunrise, but the sun only casts deeper shadows, so to speak. I have an odd way of thinking. If it offended you in anyway, ym oppolgies.
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by diamonds_2_dust | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a really nice piece truthful as well which makes it all the better. i like the way you have it sturctured and your wording good job.
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by ira | [ Reply to This ]



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