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    dots Submission Name: Jewels.dots
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    Author: Halston
    ASL Info:    20/female/carlsbad,ca
    Elite Ratio:    4.01 - 72/71/30
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 1004
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 637



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    dotsJewels.dots
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    The Sun is out
    smiling on the playgrounds
    pouring a cloumn of light
    Through the thick glass,
    Our restricting fence,
    Onto my face
    Giving a million dust particles life,
    Reminding me of summer days

    Letting the heat kiss me all over,
    watching everyone laugh
    tossing back their pimply heads
    I don't feel that joy
    I only think of the salt and sea days
    The cool breeze hugging my colored skin,
    The broken glass along the broken burning sidewalk
    illuminated like precious jewels,
    Which leads me
    To think of you.




    Submitted on 2006-01-24 22:30:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is cool because it makes you see the other side of the seasons and how beautiful the dark can be as well. There are quite a few spelling mistakes, but other than that, it looks good, kiddo!

    IK
    | Posted on 2006-01-26 00:00:00 | by Indigo Kid | [ Reply to This ]
      hm... seeing beauty as other do not see. Thinking outside the box. nice perspective.
    i see that there is some meaning beneath this that is not told strait out. I will attempt to understand
    | Posted on 2006-01-24 00:00:00 | by diamonds_2_dust | [ Reply to This ]


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