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    dots Submission Name: You make me specialdots
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    Author: Jun_I
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 1/3/1
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 869
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    Bytes: 988



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       This is the first poetry that I write


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    dotsYou make me specialdots
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    If there is one person in the world that can make me stand...
    It's you
    It there is one person that can understand how's my feeling...
    it's definitely you

    You make me see
    You make me hear
    You make me speak
    You make me feel

    When you are far from me
    I feel nothing
    Not able to speak
    Not able to hear

    When you are near me
    I feel I can have everything in this world
    Even miracles happen
    For you are the miracle itself for me

    You always support me
    Makes me believe I can do beyond impossible things
    You always understand me
    You always listen to me

    You give me your every affection
    For me alone
    You make me believe
    For what is best for me

    You always act
    For what you think is good for me
    You always makes me believe
    You love me because you do




    Submitted on 2006-01-25 06:57:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hi and welcome to E.S! Well im sure you ahve suprised most of us already here poets. Ive been here for 3 days now and this poem is one of the best love poems ive read so far. I really hope you stick with poetry and let your skill build up too its full potential. Have fun with your poetry and you will slowly soar.
    | Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by SumN | [ Reply to This ]
      Hello and Welcome to Elite Skills
    I hope this site brings you all the Joy and Love it has brought me
    Your poem is beautiful
    You really expressed yourself perfectly in this write
    I once had a best friend named Jhun who is From Baggio City Phillipines
    He was a really great Friend but I guess time changes people
    please if you get a free chance please take a look at some of my poetry and let me know what you think
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Welcome to Elite. This poem was amazing, completely breathtaking. You wrote what was in your heart, and I can feel it when I read this.
    I especially like these lines:

    "You always support me
    Make me believe I can do beyond possible things
    You always understand me
    You always listen to me"

    Those few lines make me think of the better memories of me and my ex. I hope you enjoy writing as much as I do, and good luck in your writing.

    ~*AnGeL*~
    | Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by missing_angel | [ Reply to This ]


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