Always Alone by SumN

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Submission Name: Always Alone dots

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Author:	SumN
ASL Info:	16/Male/Missouri
Elite Ratio:	3.86 - 17/22/6
Words:	113

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	209
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Always Alone dots

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Am i the only one out there

Seeing trees turn to dust

Am i the only one out there

Believing he's firm to us

Am i the only one out there

Loved, hated and bruised

Am i the only one out there

Frustrated Confused

Am i the only one out there

Who wants to gain his perception

Am i the only one out there

Who wants to change his reflection

Am i the only one out there

Who needs war but wants to change

Am i the only one out there

Who see's your'e the one to blame

Submitted on 2006-01-25 09:13:00 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  awww...u feel so aloone...

"Am i the only one out there
Frustrated Confused"
could hav been 'frustrated & confused'
& maybe u could hav used question marks...
i didnt really get this poem.
nice deep thought poem tho.
-fakeness
| Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by (fake_sanity) | [ Reply to This ]
  I know how you feel. Instead of a he, its a she in my case. This poem is goode. I like in because it conveys agony and depression. Today im lookin for the saddest and deprssing poems. Thank you for adding to my collection. By the way, nice anime.

Saint Kairo
| Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by Saint | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey no you are not the only cuz I really do feel the same lol. I like this poem. You are using very simple words, but you are talking about very complex things. Sometimes I guess each one us feels like this, but few are brave enough to talk or write about it.

Am i the only one out there

Who wants to change his reflection

Am i the only one out there

Who needs war but wants to change

I like these lines.
Nice write thanks for sharing it with us
Love shabnam
| Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by shabnam | [ Reply to This ]
  Hmmmmmmmm...this was a deep write. And like Ron said...you must learn to love yourself. you are the one who you have to consistantly live with. Therefore, you should only worry about how you treat yourself. You can find people out there that will like you for who you are...and the one's that don't like you...

*brushes off shoulder*

Get him off of there...they aren't the one's that will have long term meaning in your life.

Keep your head up and learn that you are okay just being yourself.

Much love,

Li li
| Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a deep personal write
As I say to a lot of people you first have to learn to love yourself before you can Love another
I see an urgent plea in this write to hope that someone can appreciate and respect you for who you are
I hope and Pray you find Peace my Friend
God Bless
Ron

Please if you get a chance take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
Ron
| Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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