Am i one of them? Evolving body Parts To Pistols-
using emotions as ammo turning there Hearts To Missles-
It feels like an artificial path that i Took To Train-
everyone resembles eachother we all Look The Same-
Digging Holes deeper to Earn The Debt-
Finding myself Non-purposed to Burn The Rest-
Words print out my lost breaths bringing fourth Cold Notation-
I am still a dedicated human searching for my Soul's Location-
Pondering about the image that Eats At The Scenary-
For its the reason im placed as a Piece Of
Machinery-
This is powerful This write really captured a strong message We are all individuals there are no 2 humans exactly alike This can actually be said about any living breathing creature I like the theme and I truly realize the thought that went into this write Perfectly Said Your Friend Ron
This is a very unique piece. I wasn't quite expecting the poem to be like this and at first I didn't catch on to it. I had to read it again a second time to grasp the meaning, but overall it was a very good write and I hope you continue writing.
This was unique. I am impressed. Kind of had a little bit of a rhythmic feel to it. You showed your poetic talent in this piece. I wasn't expecting at all what I read.
I hope that you continue to move forward in your writings. For if you have this much talent already...just imagine what you can build to.
Very well done. I think this is a neat read. Fine line between being a 'rebel' and being 'them'. Most of them would capitalize the 'I's in a write though. Thanks for sharing.
Submission Name: Chrome Soul
