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    dots Submission Name: Try Medots
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    Author: brokenbatman
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 475/233/44
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Story/Angry
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    Description:
       working on one of my charectors for my stories. please keep in mind this is only a single outburst and not the complete charector. all help is needed this is a tuff one for me.


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    dotsTry Medots
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    For once and all I would like somebody to actually face me! You cowards are brave enough to shove a dead rat into my locker but instead of taking credit for it all you people can do is laugh! Freaks! Damn you all! I hpoe you all burn to death in a minor car accident! I hope it is so minor you are fully alert to see the flames coming to claim your sorry asses! I hope when you get to heaven you all show up together and every Fucking one of you get called to the front of the line and Saint Peter looks justs like me! Then I hope he tells you stupid fuckers the only way your getting into heaven is if you finally tell him who put this fucking rat in my God Damn locker! FUnny now laugh it up you pieces of shit! I'll be the one laughing on judgement day! Maybe not wearing your God Damn seat belts will finally be the reason I finally have some piece and quiet around here!




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      Hey, that's me!

    In all seriousness, I love this. It's intelligently bitter, and I love smart sarcasm. I would love to hear more of this character's words :)
    | Posted on 2005-01-22 00:00:00 | by jer | [ Reply to This ]


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