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    dots Submission Name: Raymond Chandler's Wordsdots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       For those who don't know, Raymond Chandler wrote detective novels. His use of language was amazing. One of my favorite quotes is "That blonde was as pleasant as a split lip."

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    dotsRaymond Chandler's Wordsdots

    When I met you I was drunk
    on Raymond Chandler's words,
    and you fed into the fantasy,
    so call me a dame,
    compliment my gams,
    and we'll drink scotch
    Wear trenchcoats and fedoras,
    and you can solve my mystery
    for my dull life surely is a crime.

    Submitted on 2004-04-29 01:53:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      SQUEEE!!!!!! I love it - i can see it, feel it and even hear it!!! You write so beautifully that I cannot imagine that you could really see life as being dull... your imagination must have something on which to feed after all ^_^
    | Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by Transcendancing | [ Reply to This ]
      This danced with drama and suspense around a fantasy life, suspended with in a mystery novel and shelved for lack of interest.

    You used such a clever word play that one is forced to smile.

    | Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly | [ Reply to This ]
      um.. im not feelin it but ur flow was nice, it don't feel like it relates ro anything i know or understand the word use is too complicated... but it's over all a great poem.. just not for some people
    | Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by blonde_honey418 | [ Reply to This ]
      i made this a fav--it's great! even for someone who doesn't know chaandler's work, the images u paint do a really good job portrying it. :)
    | Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      Remins me of the old black and white Film Noir. The only thing missing is the wisps of smoke from the ciggarette, in it's long black holder, dangling from your fingers. This is really pretty good. You come up with some very different ideas for your writing. I commend that!
    | Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a great little piece of work! so short and yet powerful. i love the scotch and the trenchcoat and fedora image! it made me want to step into the story! brava!! i think i'll add it to my favs!!
    | Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]

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