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    dots Submission Name: Random Acts (revised!!!)-dots
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    Author: Key Wester
    ASL Info:    20/m/Key West
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 104/143/55
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRandom Acts (revised!!!)-dots
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    practice random acts
    of godliness
    from a determinists
    point of view,
    facticity,
    and its obvious
    ontological inquisition.
    who's plan was it anyways?
    the original Poet’s project of an empty promise
    (all of ours at the heart of
    things.)
    all the while
    my dog bark's out the window,
    thinking the same
    exact things as
    me.




    Submitted on 2006-01-26 12:59:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the way you end this.
    ‘all the while
    my dog bark's out the window,
    thinking the same
    exact things as
    me.’
    It’s a fun, light way to end it. Goob job.
    -HaldirLives
    | Posted on 2006-01-26 00:00:00 | by HaldirLives | [ Reply to This ]



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