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    dots Submission Name: Boomdots
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    Author: MansCreation
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Antioch, IL
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 2/4/8
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 121
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1104



    Description:
       After the drugs take effect and the bomb goes off. Hatred over when the flame of life is put out, then is everyhting really better?


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    Boom
    Ever so happily she joined the jest and partying, the drugs starting to take affect.
    She laughed hysterically drawing attention, her mind swam with thoughts, and still one was foremost.
    In her mind she counted down with the clock.
    Somehow punctual.
    Oh, so punctual.
    Five,
    Four,
    Three,
    Two,
    One,
    Boom.
    Everyone.
    Everything.
    Demolished, the last thoughts in there heads were drunk happiness and alcoholic attraction.
    Still her charred remains lie there with a satisfied smirk.
    The firemen climbed the ashes and mounds of burnt body’s, never to find a suspect or their cause for devastation.
    No one would ever know, ever.
    The pain died with her, and the hatred welling inside was engulfed in the bigger flames.
    No one made it out.
    One hundred and one people were killed that night.
    Odd how she was the one, making the one hundred seem uneven, but then it had always been that way.
    Hadn’t it?
    Boom…
    What a Funny word




    Submitted on 2006-01-26 16:28:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm not quite getting this. Did she accidentally start a fire? or what happened...i got the whole drinking and drugs part. But what happened completely? I don't think there's quite enough information to understand completely. Did this happen to someone you knew?
    Other than those few questions, it's pretty good.
    *darkwinged*
    | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by darkwinged | [ Reply to This ]



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