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    dots Submission Name: needs titledots
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    Author: _:insane2sane:_
    Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 9/8/2
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Alone
    Total Views: 145
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1357



    Description:
       this song is purely me..the truth that makes me,me.
    if u like it,great.if u dont,thats cool too.
    tell me what ya think


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    no-one wants to be with me
    its the sad truth
    not just a feeling.
    even though they're all around me
    i either stand alone in my world
    or keep on falling.
    never joined to cry
    or sing my desperate lullaby.
    ---------------------------
    Chorus:
    so leave
    dont stay you'll get too lost
    just as i've become
    walk on by,dont bother to try
    & help.

    so leave
    dont take pity..
    i let god keep doing this to me
    im trying not to care,
    cause nobody else will.
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    i could fit in,
    but that wouldnt be me.
    & i could get over it,
    but what fun would it be if i did?
    SO I.
    JUST SIGH.
    no emotion left behind.
    it's nothing different really,
    this is who i'll always see.
    looking in the mirror,
    staring back at me.
    --------------------------
    Bridge:
    put a smile on my face
    hide behind the pain
    why should i bother you,
    with all of my mistakes?

    keep it all inside,
    untill i--grow old & die.
    why should i ask for help,
    help on how,
    to fix myself.
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    Submitted on 2006-01-26 19:01:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      uhm.. i like how the thoughts were set a part.. i think the themes a bit cliché though.. this site is so full of teen angst i think if this is truly you then leave it just how it is.. i feel quite the same.. i think i wrote a poem about it that im going to post up.. much of the same thoughts reflected.. its sad how everyone feels like this
    glad u wrote, keep writing
    | Posted on 2006-01-26 00:00:00 | by thehappyfaery | [ Reply to This ]



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