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    dots Submission Name: For a Frienddots
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    Author: kellz
    ASL Info:    25/F/England
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 122/148/49
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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       What i wrote last night thinking about Michael and what he would be doing in july when he was going to be 23


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    Its when the tears begin to fall
    i realise what has happened
    you have gone and left us here
    alone and missing you.
    Without you i feel so sad
    not knowing where you are.
    I look up at the sky at night
    and wish apon a star
    wishing you could hear my cries
    and come back to me bring all
    the joy and happyness we
    had once before.
    Take these tears that i've cried
    i trust them to you.
    Why did you have to die and leave
    us here alone




    Submitted on 2004-04-29 07:16:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awwh this is sad. I think Micheal will like this, and I hope it won't be that bad, with him leavin and all. i mean there is always e-mails and stuff right.
    | Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by Nashataku | [ Reply to This ]
      I was just reading poems at random today and I ran upon this one and my heart broke into a thousand pieces for you. I have never lost a boyfriend but I did lose my best friend to suicide. it is devastating I know. you know how people always say time heals all wounds? well I wouldn't go as far as to say it will heal it totally beacause I'm sure you will never get over it fully, but believe it or not it does get easier to deal with. it's been a few years now since timmy (my best friend) died, and it hurts like hell but I know in my heart he's here with me I just know it. thats all you gotta do is remember him in your heart and you will never lose him..I hope everything is okay with you
    | Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by Broken Angel | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm sorry to hear about that. It's a very sad poem. It made me think about my grandma . But I'll give you something to think about to try to cheer you up... Michael isn't dead in your heart, or in your mind. Even though his self is gone, he's really not.
    | Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by raidonkid05 | [ Reply to This ]



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