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    dots Submission Name: Poem to the Driverdots
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    Author: nodrelsnef
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 22/32/29
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 154
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 773



    Description:
       Song lyrics--looking for the music to go with it


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    Poem to the Driver

    This old car
    Is out of gas
    If you’ve got room
    You’re free to pass.
    The wheels won’t turn
    The engine won’t fire
    Shove it in gear?
    I’ve got no desire.

    This car is out of gas
    The wheels won’t roll.
    Stalled on the highway,
    So why pay the toll?
    I drove it when sober
    I drove it when drunk
    With a suicide bomber
    Sleeping in my trunk.

    I drove it for my Mom
    I drove it for my Dad.
    I drove when I felt good
    And when I felt bad.
    But this car won’t move,
    Pedal pushed to the floor.
    Lord, this car’s outta gas
    I don’t wanna drive it no more.



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    Submitted on 2006-01-27 01:16:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      All in all it was great... made me feel like the car was myself... just a bit. You could have put a bit more emphasis (excuse spelling) on scenery tho...where were you going? but yeah the flow and scheme was pretty darn cool and i hope you keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2006-03-06 00:00:00 | by Mepo | [ Reply to This ]



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