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    dots Submission Name: Heart MurMurdots
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    Author: SumN
    ASL Info:    16/Male/Missouri
    Elite Ratio:    3.86 - 17/22/6
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 181
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 574



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       Let me love you...


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    dotsHeart MurMurdots
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    - I see your downfalls with a suddle aimed kiss
    missing pieces crumble apart now this puzzles painless
    empty chested but my arms are plated
    the part thats jaded is my hearts awakened
    distance holds us separate untuil lust is gone
    phrases like ahes to ashes dusk till dawn
    bring forth the anguish the colder nights
    facing immortal beings such as poltergiest
    i hope your nice to me for life is a burn hole
    I dont know why its me for life is eternal-











    Submitted on 2006-01-27 11:01:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Come on! If you think your poem is worthwhile, then it surely must be worth putting through a spelling checker. Half of it is nonsense as it stands. Young people in and out of love feel the urge to commit their feelings to paper, but a poem is more than a feeling. It must also have the craftsmanship with words and although it might seem to be an old fashioned idea in these days of texting, this also involves the mundane mechanics of spelling, punctuation and grammar. These are all ancient devices invented to promote communication and understanding. Work on it.
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by hanuman | [ Reply to This ]



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