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    dots Submission Name: The Pink Sasquatch Boot Theorydots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 607
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    Description:
       Happy Fun Friday Elite! My son bought me some awesome pink fuzzy furry snow boots - I look like pink he he he!

    A rainy day outside but I'm on my way to Tahoe for a snowball softball tourney in the snow! (oh yeah, & roullette so the gray must make way for sun & fun & just good positive energy! Be yourselves!

    Here's some 2 share ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

    Love,Peace,Joy&sMILEZ 2 share
    tif



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    dotsThe Pink Sasquatch Boot Theorydots
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    Someone put on "These Boots Are Made For Walkin".....
    BEcause <@> AM
    ready 2 roll
    shake my booty
    & get on my stroll

    Pink Sasquatch Boot Theory
    more than what I wear
    Attitude adjustment
    Put the inside out
    watch people stare
    Someone yells out,
    "U got
    quite the pair"

    of boots that is
    I'm "NOW" taking control
    my stroll's turning
    2 strut
    I'm on a journey
    of love
    smilin
    & shakin
    my butt ~*~










    Submitted on 2006-01-27 12:35:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hee hee! What a funny little poem. And I can imagine how darling those fuzzy pink snowboots must be! Nothing like making a statement with those hot little numbers huh? haha! This poem just screams of the free spirit that lives in you. That is great. Nothing worse than someone who is uptight with no sense of humor! Shake that booty baby! haha! Thanks for the smiles with this one. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      funny girl you are Tiff.. i can picture you in a
    pair of pink fuzzy boots, shakin' your booty in
    the snow!

    this was a fun little romp. it's a gloomy day here, so i'll just picture you in your cute boots
    and have a laugh!

    peace&love,
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2006-01-29 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this poem
    I may be wrong but I believe the reason for your joy and happiness from these boots is because they were a gift from your son
    And I can tell you love your son very much
    I really enjoyed reading this one
    Very emotional
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-01-28 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      lol, this is awesome. Made me smile, I liked it. I need to get some of those boots, lol "Quite the pair" lol, best line there.
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      this wasn't laugh out loud funny but it did put quite the smile on my face.

    "U got
    quite the pair"

    of boots that is

    that was my favorite part. i bet u had fun wearing ur silly pink boots
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      This was good, you took such a diiferent and made a cool peice out of it, alot of people would struggle with that and it didn't seem like you did. Well hope to hear from you and keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]
      I love your attitude about these boots, you're down in you shoes and don't care what anybody thinks.

    If you know you're awake and alive, the comebacks are laways fun. This is a cute piece Tiff, thanks for sharing your pink boots with us. The title is primo!

    Love,

    Nan
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      Your description is very good, but a picture of you wearing your big pink fluffy boots would be the icing on the cake.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      HaHa. That's right tiff, you shake what the good Lord gave you! This was so cute and funny. I love the sexy attitude in this one. and the almost hip hop/rock vibe of this. Have fun in Tahoe. I hope you win the game. I just got some black furry boots. I think I'm gonna strut my stuff while I'm out to day. lol. I just hope I don't hurt nobody doing my own thing. lol.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      Gosh girl, I need to get me a pair of them boots. I need an attitude adjustment. LOL
    You've got it going with this write..

    "quite the pair" < Ha!
    I loved it all..
    just what I needed to perk me up today
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is awesome...and let me guess, is it that the boots and the music made you feel smexy?? Is that the theory, you are what you wear? Hee hee. This was great. Made me smile. Peace. Best wishes.
    | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      horry for squwigly ! ~*~ lol no i loved it it was really cool how u used the "" marks and the nummber "2" the creativity is really obvoius i just dont get the <@> thingy...

    Creativity 10/10
    Orginality 10/10
    flow 8/10
    ryimes...8/10
    over all 9/10

    Trevor...~
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]
      i think i would only be caught in big fuzzy pink boots is playing a giant bunny but women can get away with that sort of thing

    this showed attitude and shakin your pink booties lol funny and well wrote, at first i wondered too what the <@> was.
    then i realized that the AM was not the time of day and was refering to person

    dax
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by dax | [ Reply to This ]


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