Description: i dont know about this one. tell me everything you think about it, good and bad, particularly bad though. but compliments are good too :)
lies -------------------------------------------
The idea of being hurt overrules
You promise those words are words of truth
But you've lied too many times before
And my head hurts just from the constant thought of you
You're the best liar I know
Maybe this situation is too complicated for me to handle
But the truth is..
I'm not going to believe the things I wish werent true
Even coming from the most reliable source,
you always come out on top
And my respect for you may fade
But the love and hate will continue to shine
Maybe jealousy is getting the best of me
But we can't allow it to get the best of us
And the rush of emotion I feel just by looking at you
Is more than you could ever understand
We're being ruined by jealousy
And a touch of ignorance
And the sad part is, the biggest risk I've taken
is the thought of even taking one...
i know how you feel. very good poem. i can really relate to it. very simple and forward. ~You're the best liar I know~ i love that line. i bet alot of people feel the way you did when you wrote this. so overall a very good poem, keep up teh good work.
OMG that is really good. i think i know what its about, or rather who. this is going into my favorite for sure. It reminds me a lot of Fall Out Boy lyrics. they are famous so you can be too.
Wow, I liked this one a lot. Those last two lines are my favorite throughout the entire poem. It's how I feel every single day of my life. I'm adding this to my favorites because I couldn't really find anything wrong with it, I"m serious. Great work.
Submission Name: lies
