wow this is an interesting, but differant i'm not really a big fan of this compared so quickly does this make any sense at all. random question did someone just dump you that you would getr so depressed listen to me, pour all that anger and depression into something. i've struggled with depression that was very severe believe me. ~Tabbie Kat
Wow, I hate those little contradicting feelings that get under your skin so easily. These sound like lyrics, too, just to let you know. I can actually hear music behind this. You rhyming was right on key. Better than mine sometimes, check out my poem Nothing Left To Lose if you want, see if you like it. Anyway, one of the better ones I've read tonight, great job.