I think it is sad that the majority of people at our school feel the same way. We are all depressed. I don't understand what you are talking about in the second stanza, and I think it sounds a little cliché the light at the end of the tunnel. But I am being too critical, you did a good job, and I've been there. Blood is a curious thing. Keep writing Tabb.
This is an overall great write and I understand where you are coming from. I've never really thought about what you were talking about in the last stanza..but close to it. Hope you're doing well, though.
Wow, this is some strong poetry. I liked it. I know what you mean about this stanza...
I want to leave to be where things are free and no one tells me who to be
I can relate to it a lot. I can relate to most of this short little poem. I've thought about stuff like that in the last stanza, but I'll never do it...and I really wouldn't if I were you. Anyway, great write.