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    dots Submission Name: Every Morning I Begindots
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    Author: nodrelsnef
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 22/32/29
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Prayer


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    dotsEvery Morning I Begindots
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    Every Morning I Begin

    Oh, Lord, tonight won’t you
    Pull me up. Oh, Lord, tonight
    I need to drink from your
    Cup. Wounded and slow to
    Respond. All that I had,
    Never here or gone. I want it
    To end, like the sound of a
    Sigh that won’t bend. Salvation
    Without humiliation. From
    Womb to tomb, to be left in
    My room. For one moment of
    Peace, to sail in formation,
    The voices cease. To flow like the
    Wind, every morning I begin.





    Submitted on 2006-01-28 04:26:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very touching . a sweet and honest prayer that could be used by many.
    His mercies are new every morning!
    wonderfully written.
    | Posted on 2006-01-28 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]
      this was cool. why didn't u do the format so that the words that rhymed were at the end of each line? that was the only thing i didn't like about this poem. the rest was right on target and it was amazing. this is going on my fave list
    | Posted on 2006-01-28 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]



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