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    dots Submission Name: Straight as Steeldots
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    Author: nodrelsnef
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 22/32/29
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Hope for a night of peace


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    dotsStraight as Steeldots
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    Straight as Steel

    I wish I could leave it
    Alone. I feel a need to
    Move when there is in
    Actuality no need to
    Move at all. Drink and
    Spittle on my collar as I dream
    Of the man I used to be. But
    There is no going back to the
    Glory days. The days of
    Jubilation are gone. And truth
    be known there were no
    Glory days. I wish I
    Could leave it alone, lay
    My head down and sleep deep,
    To sleep deep and well. To
    Remain at ease in place when
    There is no need to move. To
    Look into other’s eyes and
    Look back straight as steel.




    Submitted on 2006-01-29 02:54:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was pretty cool. it seemed like someone was just looking back on better times and wishing he could be what he once was. this was very raw. and the way u wrote this made it flow very well
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      verry nice my deer sir verry nice
    i like the passion in this the need every thing is just raw. you are verry good verry good indeed.

    any who good job

    xoxo
    that girl
    | Posted on 2006-01-29 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]



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