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Nisan Fourteen Reminders

Author: realpassion
ASL Info:    27/Male/Nigeria
Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 81 /70 /50
Words: 56
Class/Type: Poetry /Religious
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Nisan Fourteen Reminders

'Twas cherry lane, and the moon
Lit our faces silver-glazed.
As nisan fourteen dawn on our perception,
Soberness glows in our mood, whilst
We shove aside our chequered pasts
And cheerily wake-up to spirituality.
After which we will pragmatic be
Never to relapse into
Emotional treachery...

Submitted on 2006-01-29 15:27:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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