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Love Knows No Miles

Author: Hip-Hop Honey
ASL Info:    16/f/canada
Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 105 /86 /31
Words: 71
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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This was about this guy named Stephen but we never talk anymore..Now it's for Mylo :P (Who would of guessed...Hope you like it

Love Knows No Miles

We talk whenever we can
We laugh at each little thing we do
He makes me smile
When I'm blue
He loves me
Even when I'm not around
For me and him live on seprate ground
He lives there I live here
But love is all we need
love is all that needs to be shared
No kisses no hugs
Just love
Because in my world
Love knows no miles

Submitted on 2006-01-29 19:34:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is a good poem
you shouldent write a poem for one person but give it to another iv only wrote poems about two girls
the one that im with right now and the one that tried to put me in juvy
but you decription really took the meaning from the poem
| Posted on 2006-01-29 00:00:00 | by Dark Romeo89 | [ Reply to This ]
  oh,this is so precious. every girl needs a boy "friend". i really loved your title. it describes the poem as a whole.
lto me these are the most defining words of you poem:
love is all that needs to be shared
No kisses no hugs
Just love

and i 'm glad you kept it that way. wonderful work!
| Posted on 2006-01-29 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]

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