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    dots Submission Name: Living a Liedots
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    Author: forevertorn
    ASL Info:    16.f.california
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 21/30/19
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Lostfriend
    Total Views: 115
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I realize that this was my "teenage angst" kicking in when I wrote this, but that's perfectly fine. It's really just to lay it out on the line for my best friend, because I'm really getting sick of his emo bullshit phase. ^_^ Haha, I totally sound like a bitch saying that about him. He loves me. <3 lol.


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    dotsLiving a Liedots
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    I can’t remember,
    The last time you cared about anything,
    The last time you allowed yourself to be seen.
    You turn to face the day, a hollow being.
    Every time you laugh, you need to cry.
    Every time you smile, you tell a lie.
    For every tear in your eyes,
    Part of you withers and dies.
    You pretend to be something you’re not.
    You’re lies have crumbled and now you’re caught.
    You’re dead and broken because of something lost
    You’ve lost the eyes that you once sought.
    You gave up once you had fallen.
    The friend I once had is now gone.
    Her eyes have closed forever upon,
    The face you wear to confront the day.

    Your voice is just a whisper,
    You call upon your blank thoughts as you try,
    To fit them in where you missed her,
    You missed the chance to stop living a lie.




    Submitted on 2006-01-29 21:38:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really like this one, it reminds me of my friend, but just shes a girl thats all depressed cause a boy now, i know what your going through & it sucks, but just try to hang in there..things will work out. me and my friend arent friends anymore, because she started all this stuff and brought me into her problems with her b/f at the time. and well nvm that. hopeuflly you two will work it out. this is a reallly good write
    keep it up! :)
    | Posted on 2006-01-30 00:00:00 | by heather_ | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked it! i can feel your anger and annoyance- and i can relate to how u feel. i too have a friend rite now who just recently went through a similar situtaion. thankfully he's come back to reality after finding true love. corny, i know, but it's true.
    | Posted on 2006-01-29 00:00:00 | by Blazing Eclipse | [ Reply to This ]



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