This really made me laugh, every drummer i know has exactly the same attitude! i can just picture him with the paper. i loved the way you captured the ethos of bands in such simplistic terms. definately a favourite. charlie x x x
Wow...excellent...this is so different from the normal poetry in here, I would give you a hihg score just for being differet, but it's a good different... it's sparse but grand...just, wow. 5 Stars for sure
interesting, different from what is usually posted here. in my mind, i saw the screaming guitarist on stage, performing, then sitting at a table on a sunny saturday morning, reading the paper with his kids. its always nice to see both sides of the coin. Cheers!
Word. I like the uniqueness this potrays. I see how the title goes hand in hand with the Fav. lines:the guitar player has eye shadow and there is much yelling.
what a different poem never and i mean never read anything like it at all WOW in some songs, the drummers are never free though say, wh at inspired you to write this poem?? ? ?? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? thanks for sharing it was a good write john*
Submission Name: American Still Life
