Description: "A deep man believes ~...Soul's avowal of its large relations, and that climate, century, remote natures, as well as near, are part of "ITS" biography.
Chemistry takes to pieces, but "IT" does not construct. Alchemy which sought to transmute one element into another, to prolong life, to arm with power, - that was in the right direction. All our science lacks a human side. The tendant is more than the house....Man is a fagot of thunderbolts" Emerson on Beauty
Just a simple expression of being sometimes just is & "IT" doesn't need to be more than that.
Happy Week ES!
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Awake In Me Dream -------------------------------------------
Awake In Me Dream
As I relax
supported by your mountains///
sheltered in your valleys ( )
adrift in your seas ~~~
hey hows things thanx for your comment once again reading your discription and then your post you leave me in deep thought thats a good thing i believe some of us listen to our souls talk you seem to have the gift such as i well done and hope all is good with you and yours
ummm...I can sense feeling here, but there are not enough words for me to feel it. It could be more indepth. I suggest you add more to it if possible. If you decide to...cool, if not...cool as well. it's a cute poem either way.
You know something I really like how you structure your poems Origanality is important I try to use my own style with my writes This write is deep and if you really read it slowly and carefully it captures a mind of its own Very Well Done Your Friend Ron
Tiff- I like this. The whole piece is a metaphor, and I so do like metaphors. As far as it's meaning... well I don't think I am smart enuff to figgar it out, gotta ask Cleo. Gawd! Hope she don't make me ... you know... again, a 43 year old newly wed man can't hang like he did 20+ years ago. Oh well nuff with my whining, ain't it horrible?
I really like this and the way you brought it out. Neat symbols for moutains/valleys/seas. I read this as two different meanings.. One is the love of a soulmate. The other is awakening the dreams within and connecting with your inner self.. your soul. I like both ways. Very nice! ~Sandra