Son of the Damned 'Part 3'
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This is the third adittion to "Son of the Damned" series. Hope you like the form of it.
Son of the Damned 'Part 3'
Anger... Annoyance Pulsing through his veins Ignorance Stranger... Than even her belligerent pain Nothing... Seems To matter to him anymore Useless Feelings... He's shutting and locking doors Senseless... Souls They corrupt everyone he meets Bloody Beaten... He leaves them alying on the streets Suicidal... Homicides Led by the bloodstained knife Isanity Calamity... What's the point to this life......? Living off the knife Surviving from his fists Bullet holes Slit wrists Welcome to his life Hating to love And... Loving to hate Never giving up his life To the twisted hands of fate A train wreck Where the survivors were all too late Shaking with venom and rage Life's nothing but a play And he thirsts for center stage Mother's panging the cell phone line... Again Why bother to answer? She never bothered to care Wound up in her depression Shooting him toxic glares This was how she showed her love To her one and only son Whom she gave up for adoption When he was only three Through this thick purple haze His eyes cannot see What began as a dare Became an addiction Escaping police chases Became his one true conviction Hating today Despising the morrow Pathetic disgraces for human beings Drowning in their own sorrow Toxic Hatred; enough to freeze over Hell No one ever died for his sins Not as far as he can tell A world where nothing else mattered But being a five year old boy Foster father leaving him bruised and battered Yet, that was 12 years ago They all adore him but Of his past he'll never let them know They hold him up only to break him down Acting sympathetic; acting as if they care They'd give him a death cursed crown IF THEY HAD THE CHANCE... Born into darkness, never to find light Born a "blind man", never to see the sight THEY'D SLIT HIS THROAT WITH A LANCE... Because no one ever bothered; no one cares Walking down the street, he feels their glares Life's a calamity, as far as he can see Rich posers, diamond rings, a superstar sings Not the life for him, to much strife for him No love, without a friend, this life never seems to End... |
Submitted on 2006-01-30 18:50:47 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| i never read the first two 'son of the damned' poems. really thorough, really in depth. really cool. his story is the story of basically every serial killer, abandoned young, addicted young. Johnny 5 | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Johnny 5 | [ Reply to This ] | a much needed addition to son of the danmed | it adds light where he has none so illuminates your point of life being pointless but never ending | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by Animus Custodis | [ Reply to This ] | that's what i'm talking about! this was so cool. the first stanza seemed kinda like a slowed down introduction. i can see this being a song. and after the first stanza it just seemd to explode. this whole thing was amazing. poor kid. it seems like u pick the worst life possible for a person to have and put it down on paper. | | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ] | This was pretty good except the start was a little choppy and off for a little but you certainly made up for it...as always good imagry, good job at stealing song lines |  lols. I liked the series alot except I'm not sure about ur ending with this one...it seemes a little meladramatic...lol good one overall tho.peace ~Silent~ | Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ] | This was a very enthralling piece that was fueled by emotion - it was believable and well written. | This has deeper messages too I believe & I'll be looking forward to the next installment! Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share  tif  | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ] | That is amazing. The overall rhythm it has to it just adds to the clever use of words. Only one line/paragraph/stanza I dislike - | Yet, that was 12 years ago They all adore him but Of his past he'll never let them know I don't think it has the same feel to it as the other stanza's, seems a little more forced. Overall I think it's very good however. | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by ZXDPrince | [ Reply to This ] | I LOVE IT u have to keep this up this is just brillant I love these two series and can't wait for them to clash it is oging to be great I lvoe the line | Living off the knife Surviving from his fists Bullet holes Slit wrists the flow and impact of that line was just amazing this is magniicent I hope u get the othe rparts written soon can't wait for the next installment untl then later days =Logan= | Posted on 2006-01-30 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ] | |
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