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Son of the Damned 'Part 3'

Author: Toxic_Rayne
ASL Info:    18/f/a happier place
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Words: 387
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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This is the third adittion to "Son of the Damned" series. Hope you like the form of it.

Son of the Damned 'Part 3'

Pulsing through his veins
Than even her belligerent pain
To matter to him anymore
He's shutting and locking doors
They corrupt everyone he meets
He leaves them alying on the streets
Led by the bloodstained knife
What's the point to this life......?

Living off the knife
Surviving from his fists
Bullet holes
Slit wrists
Welcome to his life
Hating to love
Loving to hate
Never giving up his life
To the twisted hands of fate
A train wreck
Where the survivors were all too late
Shaking with venom and rage
Life's nothing but a play
And he thirsts for center stage

Mother's panging the cell phone line...
Why bother to answer?
She never bothered to care
Wound up in her depression
Shooting him toxic glares
This was how she showed her love
To her one and only son
Whom she gave up for adoption
When he was only three
Through this thick purple haze
His eyes cannot see
What began as a dare
Became an addiction
Escaping police chases
Became his one true conviction
Hating today
Despising the morrow
Pathetic disgraces for human beings
Drowning in their own sorrow

Toxic Hatred; enough to freeze over Hell
No one ever died for his sins
Not as far as he can tell

A world where nothing else mattered
But being a five year old boy
Foster father leaving him bruised and battered

Yet, that was 12 years ago
They all adore him but
Of his past he'll never let them know

They hold him up only to break him down
Acting sympathetic; acting as if they care
They'd give him a death cursed crown


Born into darkness, never to find light
Born a "blind man", never to see the sight


Because no one ever bothered; no one cares
Walking down the street, he feels their glares

Life's a calamity, as far as he can see

Rich posers, diamond rings, a superstar sings

Not the life for him, to much strife for him

No love, without a friend, this life never seems to


Submitted on 2006-01-30 18:50:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i never read the first two 'son of the damned' poems. really thorough, really in depth. really cool. his story is the story of basically every serial killer, abandoned young, addicted young.

Johnny 5
| Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Johnny 5 | [ Reply to This ]
  a much needed addition to son of the danmed
it adds light where he has none so illuminates your point of life being pointless but never ending
| Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by Animus Custodis | [ Reply to This ]
  that's what i'm talking about! this was so cool. the first stanza seemed kinda like a slowed down introduction. i can see this being a song. and after the first stanza it just seemd to explode. this whole thing was amazing. poor kid. it seems like u pick the worst life possible for a person to have and put it down on paper.
| Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  This was pretty good except the start was a little choppy and off for a little but you certainly made up for always good imagry, good job at stealing song lines lols. I liked the series alot except I'm not sure about ur ending with this seemes a little good one overall tho.
| Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
  This was a very enthralling piece that was fueled by emotion - it was believable and well written.
This has deeper messages too I believe & I'll be looking forward to the next installment!
Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share
| Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  That is amazing. The overall rhythm it has to it just adds to the clever use of words. Only one line/paragraph/stanza I dislike -

Yet, that was 12 years ago
They all adore him but
Of his past he'll never let them know

I don't think it has the same feel to it as the other stanza's, seems a little more forced. Overall I think it's very good however.
| Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by ZXDPrince | [ Reply to This ]
  I LOVE IT u have to keep this up this is just brillant I love these two series and can't wait for them to clash it is oging to be great I lvoe the line

Living off the knife
Surviving from his fists
Bullet holes
Slit wrists

the flow and impact of that line was just amazing this is magniicent I hope u get the othe rparts written soon can't wait for the next installment untl then later days

| Posted on 2006-01-30 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ]

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