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The Puppets of the Wolves


Author: darkness
ASL Info:    19/F/my own world
Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 524 /218 /40
Words: 123
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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The Puppets of the Wolves



We are the Puppets of the Wolves
We the puppets are strong
MIGHTY
Non can defeat us
for we stand TALL

We shall dominate all
We have our ways
O yes, Indeed We do

We have built OUR country
Its foundation is lies

We put fear in the hearts of innocent men
For when one fears
one does not understand
and when one does not understand
One is blind

O Puppets of the Wolves
Scholars have foretold
YOU shall fall
just as the Old Soviet

O look at how Mighty they were
and look how hard they have fallen

O Puppets of the Wolves
LOOK
for Verily there are lessons in history.....





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  i like it because it tells of how people fear what they dont understand, this is all too true. and yes, it is also true. the taller they are, the harder they fall. i like it. some of it doesnt make a whole lot of sense to me, but the parts that do make up for it. -shrugs-
- Michi
| Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by _Phoenix | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this alot! The part I liked most was:O Puppets of the Wolves
Scholars have foretold
YOU shall fall
just as the Old Soviet Union.

You are wright about this and I think it will be soon?
Kelley Frost.
| Posted on 2006-03-24 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  Metaphor for the men in power. This reminds me of America and the present war on terror. You describe otherness well in the lines

We put fear in the hearts of innocent men
For when one fears
one does not understand
and when one does not understand
One is blind.

I think you could drop Union following Soviet as it disrupts the flow but that last sentence is great.
love and peace
nessie
| Posted on 2006-02-09 00:00:00 | by comradenessie | [ Reply to This ]
  This poem was s o o o o that you have no idea. It is HILARIOUS. h a h a h a h a h a h a h h a ! I love it. It literally made me laugh! Call me I have to tell you something about why we are so stupid. < if that made sense. I like they way you hid the true meaning of your poem behind metaphors and similies and made the reader figure out the poem for himself.

< Unperfect 3
| Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]
  hahahahaha
that was so [censored]en corny
it was plain and clear to me
no matter what Hiruetske says
i like the message
i just wrote about that in my poem freedom
mine was alot different
dont you just love makeing fun of the sorry government fags
i like the way you wrote it
| Posted on 2006-01-30 00:00:00 | by Dark Romeo89 | [ Reply to This ]
  ur stupid poem stinks i am your brother your poem sucks your stoopid you ar stupped and dont for get you ar stuppid!


bye your brother and don't for get you ar stupped!
| Posted on 2006-01-30 00:00:00 | by Uthmaan | [ Reply to This ]
  WEll, it'S CONfUSiNG. hEh, it SOUNdS likE A PROPhECY OR SOMEthiNG. did YOU jUSt PREttY MUCh GEt bOREd ANd WRitE WhAtEVER CAME tO MiNd?
| Posted on 2006-01-30 00:00:00 | by Hiruetske | [ Reply to This ]


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