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    dots Submission Name: My Promise...dots
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    Author: Black-Wall
    ASL Info:    19 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 60/85/48
    Words: 409
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 190
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2292



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    dotsMy Promise...dots
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    Respect I demand.
    I took this gunshot to the brain, do not stand here and tell me I am the one to blame.
    After all the words that were said, cut down deep and yes I bled.
    I see the terror that shakes this frame, crumbling down like the ending, I cannot hold my own name.
    This was a battle that was on everything beautiful, your pitiful cries will do nothing, not even keep you alive.
    A knife to the back and a kiss on my face, what a tyrants gift.

    No longer will I stand here and wait for the end.
    Watch how now, your terror only fuels my reign.
    My promise / You will die in vain!
    Watch how when, you die of a tragic end.
    No longer will I stand here to guild you by hand
    My promise / You burn in vain!

    The world is in my hands!
    Boiling now, as the salt licks the wounds. Feeding on your hapless neglect.
    Did you ever think to look? To secure? Maybe it didnt mean a thing, maybe your future was bleak.
    As a tooth splinters and shatters, as the lead in the water heals the hollow. I was one made of a false name. A god? A saint? Maybe the damn ending incarnate!

    As this battle rumbles on and on!
    My promise / you will hear my name!

    No longer will I stand here and wait for the end.
    Watch how now, your terror only fuels my reign.
    My promise / You will die in vain!
    Watch how when, you die of a tragic end.
    No longer will I stand here to guild you by hand
    My promise / You burn in vain!

    [solo]
    [solo part II]

    My Promise/ [x 10]
    Hey [x 10] [background]

    My promise / Is that you die in vain
    My promise / Is that you hear my name
    My promise / Hey! Hey! Hey!

    [solo: extended II]

    No longer will I stand here and wait for the end.
    Watch how now, your terror only fuels my reign.
    My promise / You will die in vain!
    Watch how when, you die of a tragic end.
    No longer will I stand here to guild you by hand
    My promise / You burn in vain!

    The liars make who you are!
    You lairs

    My promise is!

    You will burn in hell!




    Submitted on 2006-01-30 19:36:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      honestly, it was kinda hard to follow just because i couldn't take it seriously. maybe because its music and sometimes lyrics are meant to be heard and not read, but the (!) everywhere just kinda made it a joke.
    but the writing is geninunely good!
    | Posted on 2006-01-30 00:00:00 | by sayyesspaceship | [ Reply to This ]



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