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What feels better than to hold
you in my arms?
your endless absence kills faster than a plague;
its' so breath-taking
and so unsatisfying
to know that you love me
with your all--body & soul
yet, your actions betray assurances...
Many a night I cried cos
the lies you told stab my core;
gnawing at my confidence
like a corrosive.
dreadfully I recalled the cold nights
which snatched away my sleep
cos' of your heart-poisoning joke;
Thought you were my shoulder
thought you can make me whole
thought you could be decisive...
now am confused beyond sanity.
the pain though is real,
and the suspicion--more choking,
yet,love for you stronger becomes.
for you I've fallen completely
whats my guilt for loving you rightly?
undo my woes before I become undone
else, will our hearts forever be lonely
| What's 'iziegbe'? I'm just guessing its someone you love...|
There's grammar to be corrected. And other than that is that you can take each paragraph as a poem standing on its own. Quite unique and you did a good job.
|| Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by RyukiTZR | [ Reply to This ] |