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Lines From A Bleeding Heart

Author: realpassion
ASL Info:    27/Male/Nigeria
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Words: 170
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Lines From A Bleeding Heart

What feels better than to hold
you in my arms?
your endless absence kills faster than a plague;
its' so breath-taking
simply heart-cracking
and so unsatisfying
to know that you love me
with your all--body & soul
yet, your actions betray assurances...

Many a night I cried cos
the lies you told stab my core;
gnawing at my confidence
like a corrosive.
dreadfully I recalled the cold nights
which snatched away my sleep
cos' of your heart-poisoning joke;

Thought you were my shoulder
thought you can make me whole
thought you could be decisive...
now am confused beyond sanity.
the pain though is real,
and the suspicion--more choking,
yet,love for you stronger becomes.

for you I've fallen completely
whats my guilt for loving you rightly?
undo my woes before I become undone
else, will our hearts forever be lonely

Submitted on 2006-01-30 19:45:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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There's grammar to be corrected. And other than that is that you can take each paragraph as a poem standing on its own. Quite unique and you did a good job.
| Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by RyukiTZR | [ Reply to This ]

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