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What feels better than to hold you in my arms? your endless absence kills faster than a plague; its' so breath-taking simply heart-cracking and so unsatisfying to know that you love me with your all--body & soul yet, your actions betray assurances... Many a night I cried cos the lies you told stab my core; gnawing at my confidence like a corrosive. dreadfully I recalled the cold nights which snatched away my sleep cos' of your heart-poisoning joke; Thought you were my shoulder thought you can make me whole thought you could be decisive... now am confused beyond sanity. the pain though is real, and the suspicion--more choking, yet,love for you stronger becomes. iziegbe! for you I've fallen completely whats my guilt for loving you rightly? undo my woes before I become undone else, will our hearts forever be lonely |
What's 'iziegbe'? I'm just guessing its someone you love... There's grammar to be corrected. And other than that is that you can take each paragraph as a poem standing on its own. Quite unique and you did a good job. | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by RyukiTZR | [ Reply to This ] | |