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    dots Submission Name: Utty Tututeddots
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    Author: Uthmaan
    ASL Info:    11/M/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    1.83 - 44/33/7
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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    Description:
       this is my first song .
    so what do you think?


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    dotsUtty Tututeddots
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    Utty Tututed
    The air polluted
    and everyone died
    BUMMM BUMM BUMM

    Utty Tututed
    The avalanche started
    and everyone died
    BUMMM BUMM BUMM

    Utty Tutued
    The tsunami started
    and everyone died
    BUMMM BUMM BUMM

    Utty Tututed
    The airplane saluted
    and everyone died
    BUMMM BUMM BUMM

    Utty Tututed
    The earthquake started
    and everyone died
    BUMMM BUMM BUMM

    Utty Tututed
    The eardrums got shooted
    and everyone died
    BUMMM BUMM BUMM

    Bumm BUM BUMMM




    Submitted on 2006-01-30 20:04:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well let me think i have a story to tell you ok thier waz bush sitting on his chair telling his people he needed stamps like micky mouse and the mona lisa and more so they got him a stamp. later some poeple complained about not sticky stamps so bush sent people to find out why
    because the poeple were licking the wrong part hahahahahahah i thought you'd like it cause it has something to do with licking and you are gross like that

    i miss you comment on all muh poems ok
    if you dont understand i will explain to you them ok


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    Fana
    | Posted on 2006-04-08 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      hi ummmmmmm...................
    dude make more poems man if you dont i am gonna jump you
    | Posted on 2006-06-30 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      i agree with queen of spade....i mean its just ascii....
    | Posted on 2006-06-17 00:00:00 | by urbanguttah | [ Reply to This ]
      Unperfect how could u
    i hav wayyyyyyyyyy betta grammer than this fareak
    and u kno it
    snooty ur poem sux
    big time

    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-02-09 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      ill, this is sick man. i think you might want to lay off the Tom Green for awhile though. And maybe use a different term than "tuted" regularly. peace, love, and all that good shyt
    | Posted on 2006-06-15 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      Uthmaan! This is so tight. You need to keep writing. You have better grammer that aaki!

    Love ALWAYS,

    Unperfect

    I LOVE IT ! ! !
    | Posted on 2006-02-05 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]
      shoo i thing utty is short 4 snooty which is short 4 uthmaan
    so ur sayying uthmaan tututed?
    i think...
    so basicly snooty tutes (yaani meaning uthmaan takes of his socks and shoes and the all smelly power of his feet brings the world to an end )

    not Da perfect doomsday device
    4 an evil queen who is plotting to take over the world

    Rip&Rot
    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      What the hell is utty tututed kid be more detailed
    I am so mad call me later
    Oh yeah aishah asks what is utty
    | Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah I agree with queen I am so not related to you you are so halarious well I miss you and I think the song is cute
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      Brat
    U retard
    I am soooooooo not related to you

    these lyrics are cute
    by Uty tututed do u mean that u tututed and then everyone?

    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-01-30 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      ^__~ I think you kick booty, just because you KNOW it sucks, but you don't care, and because You're just in it for the fun....That's how it should be. Poetry should be about fun and personal experiances, not form and stanzas....
    anywayz...I laughed my ass off at this one, it's funny and stupid at the same time...^_^
    Love
    Rose
    | Posted on 2006-04-19 00:00:00 | by Queen_of_spades | [ Reply to This ]


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