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    dots Submission Name: Super Bitchdots
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    Author: Indigo Kid
    ASL Info:    33/f/everywhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.73 - 428/438/115
    Words: 256
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    Description:
       This has no poetic value to it, just a rant...

    Its about an ex boss I had who is still causing turmoil for those that I love and I am getting sick of her small town bullshit! Bitch!

    This is only a rough draft, I will re post on with more of a Super Bitch Theme later...yea know like "You humiliate us with your Super Ego strength..." sort of stuff...



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    dotsSuper Bitchdots
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    You lie, you cheat, and you honestly steal
    as you hand that plate full of bullshit to
    the only one that matters for which
    his ignorance eats upon so easily
    with an unknowing smile.

    You pump up that ego of yours because
    nobody else will, when all the while
    you know that deep inside of you lies a
    dark festering demon that feeds your ego
    by humiliating others by calling them
    stupid among other names.

    You talk shit and spread rumors about
    the good at heart so you can cover
    your own ass and blame them for
    every incompetent move you have made
    and I watch and listen to all of this
    and sit back in complete amazement.

    You think they gather to greet you, or
    or so you want us to believe, but sweetie
    I am on the insecurities that eat you up
    at night and its only a matter of time
    before the world won’t shed a tear
    because of your words or actions anymore.

    Inside I feel sorry for you, and I wish
    you would pack up all your guilt,
    unhappiness, insecurities, lies and anger
    and get on the next plane to a town called
    Somewhere Else and learn how to be
    a human being again.

    Well, one of these days, I will be able to
    say and even hear your name
    without the word “Bitch” blurting out
    at the end of the sentence.

    Bitch…




    Submitted on 2006-01-31 06:38:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i share ur pity for this individual.. personally, i couldn't live with myself.. knowing how i cheated people & lied to get to where i am... i cant stand people like that. obviously they have lowself esteem to constantly put others down.
    but it definatly helps to put it on paper. it releases alot of builtup frustration.. i can definatly understand where ur comming from.. nice work.
    later.
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by vohomegirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Hahahaha! I gotta tell you the title just sucked me in here to see what this was about. I have known people that I would definitely say classify as this, and they really suck! It is sad in a way, as they really have some serious issues with themselves and are basically miserable because they hate their own lives. I enjoyed reading this one, it made me laugh and I am sure it wasnt your intention to do so, but I thank you! haha! I hope writing this rant has made you feel a little better and I hope you dont meet too many more of these people in your life, although I am pretty sure you will...it seems the world is full of them! Anyway, one hell of a rant! take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH

    I FREAKIN HEAR YOU!

    LMFAOOOO

    sometimes you can get so damn mad at someone that sadly that is the ONLY word fitting! i know a couple of them, and i m sure i have been one a time or two myself...but this is just great at calling someone out for what they really are...

    just a biatch! LOL

    nice rant!

    -nikki
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by stolie77 | [ Reply to This ]
      Well...a fella just has to read anything titled Super B*tch, HA! Nice rant Kid!
    Yeah, too often the ones who are going around spreading rumors are the ones with the insecurities aint they?

    A good rant like this doesnt need to have poetic value to it at all...I think if might defeat the purpose of rant writing, ya know?

    Nice and I too feel a little bit bad for this bee-atch, but then again, I dont know the whole story, hee-hee!
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      PMS? Anyone? Somebody clue this [censored] in- It sounds like she has some serious mental issues- Some people like to try to be in control of every situation- like to feel superior- because inside they feel like nothing. Oh well- its really HER problem- dont make her issues yours- offer her some midol or something- (LOL) I can relate- good vent! Bonnie
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by delusional | [ Reply to This ]
      this was slightly ammusing but does sounds like a rather dickish person...yeah I know I should say more but yeah it was a rant so it didn't need to flow or anything so for what it's intended to be it fulfilled its purpose..this was a fair thing to be pissed off at for whatever it's worth.
    peace
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      He He...I had to laugh...U talk about "him" calling others names yet you do it to..We all do it..Not taking up for "him" Because it sounds like he is a real [censored]..lol ...(c what i mean) But this peice still caught my eye, in fact i wasnt goin to read it then i caught a few of the words and was like "what the hell...read it" .. But im glad i did... Your emotions really show through and although, lik eyou said, there is no poetic structure, i would not change anything about this write..Great job and keep it up....lol Better times..
    RandiKae
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by RandiKae | [ Reply to This ]
      For one thing I would never put up with the name calling and I don't think anyone else should either. Sounds to me like someone needs to take this person out back for a little "attitude adjustment!"
    They say there is one in every crowd and I guess that pretty much holds true, but, like I said...attitude adjustment for this person.
    (Raises coffee cup to say)
    "Here's to better times!"
    !doc'
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by dr_tigger | [ Reply to This ]


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