Description: 1/31/06: Written in English class. Um... Nothing I can really say about this right now. Any thoughts welcome as always.
Song III -------------------------------------------
Wake me up in the morning
When everyone's feeling fine
Let me relive the good times
And forget what you said
Don't let me stay on this thorny path
Of my life
You see me standing here
All but alone
You know how hard I try
To keep myself inside
But what I want to know
Is where are you now
Watch me in the daylight
when I'm laughing with my friends
Can you see the pain I fight to hide
Do you see how much I want to find
A way to escape from my fears
I spent so much time
Trying to forget about you
Little did I know that everything you said
Was killing me
I fought back the flood of my memories
To place them in my locked mind
Leave me in the twilight
So I can dance again
Leave me to hide my suff'ring
Instead of digging up my pain
Why do you have to be
The one to know me
I like it. It's very true to your style, and a lovely piece. I really enjoyed reading it. I'm not sure what yoiu means, but I trust you know. *giggles* Maybe change that bit to 'you'.
Do [yoiu] see how much I want to find A way to escape from my fears
Anyhow, you did a bonnie job on it. Take it a little slower when you're typing it up though huh? Still nice though.
Submission Name: Song III
