Description: Whatever you feel like writting i accept it all
Souls -------------------------------------------
Souls of exploration
With little or no inspiration
But still we continue on with our different situations
With no preparation you would swear I was Satan
But low and behold way down deep in your soul
You will find inspiration
I fully disagree with No_purpose, I think that the first and last lines are fine as they are. This is a little poem about finding inspiration, short and sweet, and I think it works like that. One thing- I believe the saying is 'lo and behold', no 'w'.
I like how it almost starts and ends with inspiration. It says "little or no inspiration", then becomes more optimistic, like you don't have much inspiration but it will come to you later. The line i don't understand though, is the one about satan.
Uh, this COULD be good. Though, I think the last line and the second line totally contridict... I mean I get what you are saying, but the way you express it and such..it bored me. I'm sorry, but I got no rise of emotion from this. Try making this again, if you do tell me, I'd like to read it.
Submission Name: Souls
