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    dots Submission Name: Animas tidedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Prose/Happy
    Total Views: 843
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 328



    Description:
       Windy here today in the mountains of Durango, CO...sat at lunch by the river...a lunch quickie if you will....Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsAnimas tidedots
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    Roll Spring
    Animas River
    full of winter's
    melted snow,
    Run Spring
    Animas River
    to the summer
    ocean go
    Race Spring
    Animas River
    crested waves a
    wake of flight
    Fly Spring
    Animas River
    wings of geese
    nature kite




    Submitted on 2004-04-29 15:24:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Durango, Co. I've a friend from there. I also have family around there, i'm gonna have to go someday. You can here a thousand stories, and see many pictures, and read many of poems. But it only takes one to strike you. It's elegant without out being sappy. sounds nice, be well.
    | Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      If the Animas river is as beautiful as your words, it must surely be a sight worth seeing. Simple, serene, sensual, soft and superb. Well done.
    | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Asian flavour and girl scout song lyrics with newly green leaves waving at all of us.
    But the sea gets a mention and all of a sudden there's grown-ups in the poem.
    I like the way you've done this and it works 'on a number of levels' - how trite did that sound?!
    You know what I mean...
    K
    | Posted on 2004-04-29 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]


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