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And Our Lips Collide

Author: Mia
ASL Info:    17/F/MD
Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 103 /123 /52
Words: 226
Class/Type: Poetry /Romance
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And Our Lips Collide

Your Eyes

c o n n e c t i n g
with mine

Your Hands
[up]on my waist

and Our Lips
c o l l i d e

Submitted on 2006-01-31 18:49:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like the short and descriptive poem that fills the reader with beautiful imagery. I am going to add this to my fav's. I also like how you used simple language and the use of "collide" makes it a powerful poem.
| Posted on 2006-02-01 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ]
  this was a cool poem. simple language, but the word 'collide' is very strong, even though it's short, that word really carries it through. nice job
| Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by onepieces | [ Reply to This ]
  Well, I love the title of this poem. Very, very short but interestingly sweet.Describes that majical moment when lips meet. pretty good idea. I would have never thought of this. Keep up the romance!
| Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]

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