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    dots Submission Name: the world and lovedots
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    Author: lil_gh0st_girl
    ASL Info:    16-F-NV
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 32/38/21
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 203
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1153



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    dotsthe world and lovedots
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    she took my heart
    and cut in half
    when she told me what she did
    i just wanted to laugh
    i thought she was lieing
    but what did i kno
    she was the one laughing
    behind my back she went
    so many times
    falling in love with others
    and lieing to me about it
    she deleted my heart
    i wanted to die
    i wanted to cry
    but i stood up for my pride
    but died behind it.
    as everyone looks at me
    while im up on stage singing
    they dont realize wats going on in my head
    just the words that come out of my mouth
    i look at the audience
    the look on their faces
    wondering if they've ever been in love
    i see couples
    and i see loners.
    being judged by the people around them
    doesnt that hurt them?
    it hurts me.
    knowing the world judges me
    just cuz i love the same sex
    i try not to let it get to me but it does
    and i give in
    the lights dim and my voice fades
    singing about love and roses
    the only thing in my mind...
    is her.




    Submitted on 2006-01-31 19:26:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Its a nice poem even though it confused me a lil bit but hey a lot of things confuse me so yeah very nice write very cool and you know hope to read from you some more soon
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]



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